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2015-03-30, 12:30:47
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bryanwrx

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Hey cyan that's just a test cam so i can have a better look on the greeneries..haha..yea this image is based in the Caribbean (Aruba more precisely)..so sunset can be differ..

Orange/yellow look
http://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/01/03/46/94/aruba-sunset-at-pinchos.jpg
http://cdn.aruba-travelguide.com/slideshow/sunset_sailing.jpg

pink/yellow

http://image.weather.com/web/multimedia/images/slideshows/exotic/exotic21.jpg

Update:
Darken some stones..and fixed some greenery here and there

« Last Edit: 2015-03-30, 12:38:39 by bryanwrx »

2015-03-30, 23:20:32
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Better, although now you picked to worst possible camera angle for any arch viz xD

This is hardly your typical archviz :)
I actually like this angle better, with the road leading up to the... house(?).

2015-03-31, 01:04:04
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I love the detail you put in the pic!

I think your subject can be shown from a more interesting perspective! imho a low PoV would add mistery to the scene and make the observer feel "in" the scene...

Good work!
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2015-03-31, 02:05:29
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bryanwrx

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Thnks ignicapillus and blank..:)..yeah a low pov can add alot of mistery..but the latest pic I uploaded I didn't focus on the composition of the image..more like a test cam on the greeneries to see if the mixing of the various plants r in harmony with each other (other words looks more realistic)..but yeah later on when i'm finish with everything i'm gonna put some camera pov testing with some good composition and from there choose the best shots that I like :).

But thnks guys for your feedback :)..glad u liked the environment :)..peace

2015-04-01, 02:05:49
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Some updates on camera position I like so far..some feedback wil lbbe awesome




2015-04-01, 14:39:30
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Looking good. You could work on the road itself - differentiate the texture and geometry around it, and maybe add some kind of a hero object in the foreground - dead tree trunk or something like that to break a bit the greenery.

2015-04-02, 13:49:12
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bryanwrx

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Thnks bluebox..yeah the road need some fixing to do..I do that later..thnks for the feedback :)

2015-04-04, 03:47:26
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Added some cactus..I think im reaching my goal with the greeneries XD


2015-04-04, 16:10:48
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That's some great progress! Only two things seem a bit off: some of the greasses in the foreground have the same orientation/topology so they're easy to spot as CG, the other thing is the trees in the background, they seem either too flat or stretched in z-axis.
But the whole thing looks very natural, love the lighting and mood.

2015-04-04, 16:59:34
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Thnks pokoy..i guess i need to make more variations ..hehe..to trees in the background r actually like that..they r flatlike look in their zaxis. Some example here where I based my trees on http://www.columbusmagazine.nl/images/user_images11/53891/1000x1000/orgineel.jpghttp://static.panoramio.com/photos/large/28303668.jpg .thnks for the feedback :)
« Last Edit: 2015-04-04, 17:03:13 by bryanwrx »

2015-04-04, 21:31:13
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there is just something off about those trees in the background - they look as if they are stretched in XY dimensions... other than that the vegetation is flawless!
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2015-04-04, 22:32:48
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I guess I have to tone down the x/y axis branch length :P and thnk u for the feedback
« Last Edit: 2015-04-04, 22:38:45 by bryanwrx »

2015-04-06, 22:27:30
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Awesome. It keeps getting better and better!
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2015-04-10, 18:11:57
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Some updates.. almost there..Finished with the environment(trees still need some fixing)..and tried out daylight evironment. So far I like the mood and camera composition.:)..feedback r welcome.