Author Topic: Abandon treasure  (Read 15781 times)

2015-02-26, 23:49:02

betwrx

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Just bought corona and testing it out on a new work i'm currently making..I'm quite happy with it. If only the corona scatter had more options for more control on scatter.. like spline control would be awesome.


2015-02-28, 04:34:05
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bryanwrx

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Some more progress..fiddling around with the environment till i'm satisfied with it..still need some more tweaking :)


2015-03-02, 11:46:31
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nehale

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Where did you get the trees from?
I had a girlfriend once.....her name was Vray

2015-03-02, 20:04:42
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bryanwrx

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Where did you get the trees from?

I made them myself :)

2015-03-02, 20:06:54
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bryanwrx

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More updates..getting there...model some more grass stones for better variation..looking better now, but still need to add medium/large stones and plants :)


2015-03-03, 07:46:26
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nehale

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really awesome, do you mind selling them to me
I had a girlfriend once.....her name was Vray

2015-03-04, 00:00:51
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bryanwrx

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Hmmm..im not planning to sell them yet :/

2015-03-12, 16:24:53
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bryanwrx

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Started working on the house to give it a real old abandon feeling. Now I need to add some "broken" windows and some more fine details around the house


2015-03-18, 20:15:21
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bryanwrx

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More updates...added more details..did a little background treetest..:)..feedback r welcome!


2015-03-29, 15:46:57
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bryanwrx

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More updates..fixed the house texture,,added more bushes here and there..working on the rocks scattering..still not quite satisfied :S


2015-03-29, 16:10:18
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Cyanhide

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I kinda like it, but the overall scale of the road seems of, not sure how to put it. It just seems like to big in comparison with the house ( given perspective/distance etc )

2015-03-29, 19:05:44
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bryanwrx

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Yes you're right about the road..I already had it written down to fix it (cause I too didn't like it), but i'm currently working on the major important and complex part now..which is the nature elements :).The road can easily be fixed later on.
thank u for ur feedback (glad im not alone that find the road a bit off :p)

2015-03-29, 19:25:10
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bluebox

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The images look really nice. The scale was bothering me also from the beginning. I think that your camera is positioned too high. Currently it feels like it was rendered form the house ceiling level.
Compliments on the greenery tho!

2015-03-29, 21:02:48
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bryanwrx

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Thnks to notice it too bluebox..I'll fix it later :)

When I said nature complexity I talk about this. (I'm satisfied now with the greenery still need to add some cactus and I think I'll call it done for the greenery :S)

p.s. I think the rocks looks too clean in my eyes..i guess i layer them with an dirt map

« Last Edit: 2015-03-29, 21:22:56 by bryanwrx »

2015-03-30, 08:49:11
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Cyanhide

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Better, although now you picked to worst possible camera angle for any arch viz xD Straight on is a big no no. Always try to show 2 sides, straight on shots tend to be boring because you're missing your overall silhouette etc, also flat.

I don't think your rocks are to clean, but might I suggest to go for a more pink sky? you're image screams Africa, so either pink or really red orange'ish.

like this -> http://www.skyhdwallpaper.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/African-Sunset-9.jpg
http://ellieericson.com/wp-content/uploads/galleries/post-6/full/2011MasaiMaraPanoramaSunset-.jpg
http://www.thechristianreview.com/reviews/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/Berkeley-San_Francisco-Oakland-Sunset-Panorama.jpg