WIP improvments

[daveclive]

Hi Guys,

I'm working on a product shot for a protein paste.
Does anyone have any suggestions on how to further improve the render, maybe lighting or materials?

I have attached a quick pass draft render of how it's looking so far

C4D R19 / Corona B2 c3
OSX

any suggestions or comments welcome

[Jadefox]

How about very soft fingerprint smudges ( barely noticeable ) at the markers you would
tear it upon ?

[Gruender]

Maybe give it an environment and let it stand up, maybe lean it on a fruit bowl or something (don't know about your client wishes).
You need a better camera angle and image compositing. Angle and placement are a bit boring at the moment, mood and lighting look good.

cheers

[Beanzvision]

I agree with the above. It does look a little boring. It definitely needs an environment. Perhaps an open packet with the actual product scattered could be interesting. Currently, It's lost with that background.

[Gruender]

For faster feedback you could use the Corona discord. I guess you get faster and maybe even more feedback.

[daveclive]

The environment idea looks awesome.

thanks for the feedback guys

[Beanzvision]

The environment idea looks awesome.

thanks for the feedback guys

You're most welcome!