Cabin in the forest

[vehr]

Hi all!

My first architectural concept. The vision of the place to clear one’s head targeted at the individuals who need rest, seclusion from other people, the world and daily life. A cold, misty forest in the context of a warm space of seclusion is supposed to help and shape character, as well as invoke emotions and willingness to ponder. Both the building itself and the interiors will be designed to affect the flora and fauna as little as possible.

I hope you like it!
p. Tomek

http://tomekmichalski.com/
http://www.facebook.com/tomekmichalskicom

[Jack]

looks so weird and scary
I wouldn't live in such place...))   

[Edvinas]

Ok, and nobody tells how good this is?

I love the architectural concept. Outside comes inside. And people can feel the nature being inside. Thats a nice playing. I would love to spend some time there :)

What concerns visuals. You should work more on materials. They are too dry to be natural I think(greenary, plywood). I love the atmosphere you created.

Keep up!

[mitviz]

very well done! but the interior is too much for me

[maru]

I don't have much rights to judge your work and I can see you put a lot of efforts into it, but in my opinion you focused too much on the "decorations" like birds or bunnies instead of simply exposing the architecture. Such ornaments are good, but when they are subtle. Again, this is just my opinion and I can also understand it if this was your goal.

Some technical stuff:
-some bump map/displacement on the trees close to the camera would make them look much better
-stretched uvs on stones
-too strong bump on the inner wood material, I can imagine getting splinters when touching it :)
-wood material seems too contrasty, makes it hard to focus on the whole interior

[romullus]

I like how you reproduce woods alot. Nice atmosphere.

As for architecture, i find it very obtrusive and inappropriate for such place, but maybe that's just me.

[ignicapillus]

angled shape reminds me of the great Serbian architect Peđa Ristić, a strange mix between a hippy and H. D. Thoreau, that during Cold War was living in huts designed and built by himself on the trees in islands on the Sava river, in Belgrade:


(pic from Avant Art Magazin)

As for the renders, I find the wood texture too contrasting too, and a bit confusing; while I like exteriors!

[vehr]

thanks everyone for feedbacks. I definitely agree with some.
Wood texture inside the cabin it's too strong. too much contrast in post production.

[dartofang]

overall i love the mood and the design of the structure. ;)

[vehr]

thanks a lot!:)

[Nekrobul]

http://www.evermotion.org/articles/show/9395/v-ray-workshop-top-5-march-29-april-4-2015-


LOL maybe you should sew them

[maru]