Author Topic: Personal home project 14  (Read 3486 times)

2014-12-28, 16:53:20

Art15

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Hi everyone

Here is my latest project done with Modo and Corona
Criticism and comment are welcome.





The world is a work in progress

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2014-12-30, 13:45:50
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leocv

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Very nice.
Good lighting.

Best,
Leo.
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Keep it simple, stupid!

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2014-12-31, 09:58:57
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Nejc Kilar

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It`s great and cool but I would let it have a few more passes to reduce the noise :)
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2015-01-05, 14:39:14
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Art15

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Thank you very much leocv!

Thank you nkilar,
I left for a long time and I do not think it has much noise. In the first two pictures the carpet looks like it has noise, but it's the texture. In the third image there is a little noise caused by DOF, maybe next I should soften the DOF more
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2015-01-05, 15:48:10
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Apart from the noise, I think you could light your room with the external light only (a sun ?). Here the light behind the camera distorts images.
I like minimalism in general, but here I think it lacks detail ...
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2015-01-06, 13:41:23
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Art15

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Apart from the noise, I think you could light your room with the external light only (a sun ?). Here the light behind the camera distorts images.
I like minimalism in general, but here I think it lacks detail ...

Hi RolandB,

There is only the sunlight! The light behind the camera is because the window that exists behind, there is no plan, only clarity outside the house ...
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