Author Topic: Bedroom+Loggia  (Read 9378 times)

2014-10-22, 12:15:14
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iMotion

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Applause you wait?
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What you talking about? What applause?
I'm  asking about some advices.
Read my previous post, plz...
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2014-10-22, 17:43:40
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Okay, iMotion I'm wondering what you want to tell with your images.
It looks to much like a clean registration of a small space. The materials are great but the lighting could use more depth to show the small space appears bigger as it actually might be. If this is something you want to tell of course :)
The media is turned on so there must be somebody in the room but I can't see their is any life (except from the first image. Somebodies coffee is getting cold there).

So if you want some constructive critisism than I would say that you use the light and composition to tell a story not renders of a clean registration of a space.





2014-10-22, 20:48:11
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Okay, iMotion I'm wondering what you want to tell with your images.
It looks to much like a clean registration of a small space. The materials are great but the lighting could use more depth to show the small space appears bigger as it actually might be. If this is something you want to tell of course :)
The media is turned on so there must be somebody in the room but I can't see their is any life (except from the first image. Somebodies coffee is getting cold there).

So if you want some constructive critisism than I would say that you use the light and composition to tell a story not renders of a clean registration of a space.

Ok, thank you very much
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