My first try

[egeislekel]

This is my first try. I hope you like it.
3dsmax 2014 & Corona

[musdy91]

i think not bad for a start at all

[subpixelsk]

right not bad but maybe few suggestions - tiling of the bump/diffuse map on the wall is too obvious, try to make more sophisticated texture :) pillows look plastic and not like fabric (i mean shape and wrinkles, material is quite ok) and maybe lower bump on the floor

[egeislekel]

Thank you for your advices. I'm going to try.