Author Topic: FED5B - c&c please  (Read 2348 times)

2013-03-06, 23:14:39

maru

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Here's my latest render. I'd like to hear some criticism to make it as good as it can be. What would you change? What looks good, what looks bad? Any suggestions? Tips on composition?

2013-03-07, 06:29:38
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helge75

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You need to put a hdri environment, and from the front at an angle of one light.Sorry for my English.

2013-03-07, 08:16:10
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Ludvik Koutny

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Also, metals should have some structure... 

2013-03-07, 08:25:50
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To another view, the view like from the bottom. You can still put other objects next to or behind the camera and of course DOF :)
Also there is an error in the smoothing of the model.
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2013-03-07, 15:20:02
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Thanks for the replies! I will try to fix all the issues and find some nice HDRI environment. The metal has a subtle bump map, but you are right, it's too subtle. ;) I'm not very good at modelling, always have trouble with chamfering edges and polys.