Author Topic: Raw Izba  (Read 702 times)

2023-12-05, 13:40:09

PurPurum Design

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Hello Everyone,
 

How to bring old to new?
Connection between old roof construction and cozy modern space with very wooden flow.
Izba in Polish means chamber.
I hope you will like the mood ^^

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2023-12-13, 10:13:01
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rozpustelnik

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Very nice mood. So nice it made me overcome my reluctance and write some constructive comments.
The old parts of the building are well done and convincing - truss and beams, boarding, floor (some nice wood replacements), walls (brick with exposed pre-painting and raw clay), perhaps windows are too damaged- one can spend a fortune to heat the space.
The scene would benefit from more messy look, now it's super-sterile and without any signs of life. Who lives there?
Also the fireplace needs some love - not usable in real-life scenario (think about all the mess on the floor while cleaning) and visually kinda fake - no ash, no carbon stains on the glass, flames are schematic. The stone cladding of the fireplace is also somewhat weird. Maybe it's the direction of light but I cannot resist the feeling that there is something wrong with the displacement (when viewed from the sofa side).
 

2023-12-13, 17:19:24
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mrsacan

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The scene would benefit from more messy look, now it's super-sterile and without any signs of life.

I'm not the OP but I disagree. Images are already full of textures, strong dramatic lighting (and the contrast it caused), more props would be a mess.