fallen titan wip

[daveclive]

hey all,

please help me in improving this render.

The idea behind the shot is a giant fallen titan that has been killed in the past and his remains lay on this landscape.

I want to get accross the size of the image, hence why adding the birds to show the scale compared to them.
I am stuck in how to move forward and improve the shot.

Any tips please?

[TomG]

I'd add a building, vehicle, or person - funny thing with the brain is that for me my first interpretation would be that these are very small birds, rather than a very large skeleton :) A human-centric bias about the size of people (and the skeletons inside them!) I'd also make the grass and rocks smaller just to further emphasize the skeleton size.

[daveclive]

Thanks Tom. good feedback. Thinking about what you said adding a person or vehicle (possibly wrecked vehicle etc) will help sell the scene