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[Mohamad]

Hi guys :)
See my last project.
pleas comment me! thanks

http://www.instagram.com/mohamad.akbari.arch
http://www.behance.net/akbariarch

[romullus]

Hi,
Overall your image looks very nice, but i don't like how the plaster damage looks so procedural. I don't know how you made it, but i would try to search a way to drive the damage with bitmap instead of procedural noise. Top left corner of the image, looks a bit empty, maybe it's worth to add some interesting detail here. Other than that, looks very good!

[Nejc Kilar]

I like it a lot but to improve I agree with Romullus. I'd also consider adding some subtle break up details at the parts where the plaster ends (so basically at the borders). Something to further break it up but its smaller detail.

Great job!

[Mohamad]

Hi,
Overall your image looks very nice, but i don't like how the plaster damage looks so procedural. I don't know how you made it, but i would try to search a way to drive the damage with bitmap instead of procedural noise. Top left corner of the image, looks a bit empty, maybe it's worth to add some interesting detail here. Other than that, looks very good!

I like it a lot but to improve I agree with Romullus. I'd also consider adding some subtle break up details at the parts where the plaster ends (so basically at the borders). Something to further break it up but its smaller detail.

Great job!

Hi  friends, Thanks for your comments. I completely agree with you.but this project was submitted for a rendering competition and I did it very quickly.be cause I had a lot of work and was very busy, and I could not put more time on the project. yes , You are right. I missed some details!