Hi.
What I like here is that is animation. Great.
But editing leaves much to be desired.
Rendering it self is quite nice but you have to take care now more on camera movement.
Idea is ok, but try to go back little bit back when going over the car and can be higher or lower then.
Now we see just "corner" part of the car. Try to think like you want to sale this car.
Don't take me wrong I try to help you get right.
If this is work in progress don't put to gallery just find "work in progress" place in this forum.