Author Topic: FINISH WORK  (Read 2577 times)

2013-12-05, 07:21:57

delkin

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TRABAJO FINAL COFFE

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DELKIN MEZA ROJAS

2013-12-05, 09:48:13
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RolandB

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Hi delkin
Finished work or a wip ? i think there are a lot of problems on your scene.
First you need to have some bump on the bricks; use a normal map.
Some of the wood textures are too repetitive.
Ceiling is curious : there are black holes above the beams, you have to put another shader here.
The proportion of the sofas are strange, compare to the chairs...
Your lighting is weird : where does it come from ? It looks like an exterior scene..
Your chandeliers are nice, you have modeled them yourself?
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2013-12-05, 13:43:00
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Roland friendly for their insights, I'm wrong is a work in progress, will correct all your criticism and get better work, the lamps are modeled in Max
DELKIN MEZA ROJAS