Author Topic: The Last Shower  (Read 1618 times)

2018-03-08, 00:59:43

Mouhamad Asswad

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The bathroom is not just a place to shower, it is a place to enjoy too.
« Last Edit: 2018-03-08, 01:12:12 by Blackium »

2018-03-08, 11:37:37
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Geezer

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Hi,

The scene has potential in it but you really ruin it with the toilet/bidet in the foreground.
In a decent bathroom things like this cant really happen.
Try a bench or a different furniture instead.
The ripple effect on the water reads too heavy as well.
Otherwise as I said this scene can work with a bit of care.