Author Topic: Business Park in the Park  (Read 4917 times)

2017-12-07, 14:38:00

Dippndots

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Hey guys, I thought I’d show off this landscape view we did for a recent project.

Let us know what you think!



2017-12-07, 14:50:56
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Very nice nearly everthing.
The trees on the right side, are loosing detail, because the area is a bit too dark.
Is that real?

2017-12-07, 15:07:08
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Thanks Flamingo, everything is 3D, so that's just an area of low exposure.

2017-12-07, 15:33:29
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Looks like a photo. I think the foliage materials are spot-on.


Also, the clouds and sky are probably not 3d, right? ;)
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2017-12-07, 15:46:00
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Stunning, I'm having a hard time deciding wether this is just a photo or a render :-)
What lighting did you use?

2017-12-07, 16:00:42
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Wow guys, thanks so much.

Maru: Yes, they're the exception ;) We've dabbled with making our own HDRIs in Vue or something like it, but the render time is pretty silly unfortunately.

Wilber: It's the cloudysun 41 degrees HDRI from cgsource. A regular go-to of ours.


2017-12-08, 00:16:15
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mferster

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Looks great overall; the only problem I'm having is that the image looks a little too uniformly green. Especially with the long grasses along the river's edge. They provide a great opportunity to breakup the foreground and background and feel could be better utilized. I hope you don't mind, but I did a quick photoshop touchup that I think illustrates a little of what I'm talking about.

2017-12-08, 01:16:00
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qbic-ft

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it looks great but I think the water needs some work. It doesn't look very realistic but everything else looks excellent

2017-12-08, 12:06:18
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mferser: Nice, I agree, a bit more color variation in there helps, thanks.

qbic: we wrangled for a bit with the water, maybe sticking a boat or some kayakers to break up the expanse of water would've helped

2017-12-08, 22:52:05
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I don't really agree with the critics. That's a stunning job, I had hard times trying to understand if the foreground was a picture or CGI vegetation.

2017-12-09, 01:49:53
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All detail in shadows? Looks clipped in center shadows
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2017-12-09, 05:14:05
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The image stunning. Congratulations !
Personal opinion: If I had to add something I would create a trail of water behind the ducks .