Author Topic: Residence on the Lake  (Read 1951 times)

2017-03-31, 12:38:52

cabrnoch

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Hello guys,

this is my recent non commercial project.

I would like to hear your opinion and criticism, so I can improve my skills.

Thanks

2017-03-31, 20:33:26
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Erald

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Great image! In my opinion, what ruins a bit the scene is that shinny seat right in the middle of the frame. Either move it a bit so it doesn't ruin the composition, or change the material to smth else. It was the very first thing where my eye went as soon as I clicked the render. I would not concentrate the attention in such a small element of the scene.
Otherwise, great render and great lightening! 

2017-04-03, 08:18:53
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cabrnoch

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Erald thank you for your comment. I agree. Improvement of composition is one of my current goals.