Author Topic: My Architecture graduation Project.  (Read 5897 times)

2017-03-30, 16:55:00

FAZ

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Hi all!

I want to share you one of the most important project for me, this is the final stage of a long and hard process of eight years of  University, it's my Architecture graduation project: "SPORTS INFRASTRUCTURE: Access station to Mapocho River". Santiago, Chile.

The project was modeled on Rhinoceros and completed at 3dsmax for the general context and details.
Render engine was Corona Renderer 1.5.
And the post-production was just some people on Photoshop and some little adjustments at Ligthroom.

The firt render was inspired from Marek Denko image, "Her Eventual Hesitation". And the HDRI is a sky with Color Correction for pink mood. (From his page noemotion.net, 06-02_Sunset_C.hdr).

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Entire Project Link: https://www.behance.net/gallery/50844399/SPORTS-INFRASTRUCTURE-Access-stationto-Mapocho-River

Team Page: https://www.facebook.com/FAZARQS/

I really hope you like it :).
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2017-03-31, 14:48:28
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Ałtaj

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Great project, hope you've got 5++ :)

How had you achive long exposure effect on car stop light?

2017-03-31, 17:20:41
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FAZ

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Great project, hope you've got 5++ :)

How had you achive long exposure effect on car stop light?

Thanks Altaj!
I did that light on photoshop with a mask, but you can make that effect in corona with a ligth objet + motion blur, that way is more controlable and realistic, but i can't make that becouse i use all the memory for the scene and corona stop me the render and i have to simplify all :/.

2017-03-31, 19:43:52
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Here is an attach of a raw render direclty from corona VFB to see what is post-production.

2017-03-31, 21:35:30
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qbic-ft

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the quality of the renderings are excellent.

It looks like you focus was on the renderings more than the architecture....the mood is depressing and the building and surrounding is very weathered.
if i was your professor of visualization i would give you an A+++ but if I was your professor of design maybe a C+ because you couldn't sell your design well... I don't saying that you design is bad... it looks very good but is difficult to buy it with those renderings.

Selling projects thru renderings you have to capture the money shot so your "clients" want to be there.

I would love to see your project more like if you want to win an architectural competition.





2017-03-31, 23:06:10
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FAZ

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the quality of the renderings are excellent.

It looks like you focus was on the renderings more than the architecture....the mood is depressing and the building and surrounding is very weathered.
if i was your professor of visualization i would give you an A+++ but if I was your professor of design maybe a C+ because you couldn't sell your design well... I don't saying that you design is bad... it looks very good but is difficult to buy it with those renderings.

Selling projects thru renderings you have to capture the money shot so your "clients" want to be there.

I would love to see your project more like if you want to win an architectural competition.
Hi qbic-ft.

Thanks for your comment, and Thanks God you aren't my architectural teacher. haha

Well, about the mood of the renders and the relation with the focus on this over the architecture sounds extrange, is difficult to design from that, i don't post the procces of conceptualization and  formalization because this topic is about final render results not process of design, but whatever, my mood is not arbitrary, i try to traduce the particularity of the context in the images, searching for visualizations that demostrate the reality more than a project to sell, i attach some context images for you to see what i mean.

Regards.

2017-03-31, 23:25:44
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qbic-ft

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I get it about the context and your renderings are beautiful but i think they are not showing very well your design skills. Most of the time you have to have renderings for different types of audiences... and you already have advantage for being architect/ designer with excellent visualization skills.
   there views from the artistic point of view are great but if you show this to investors, clients, city planners may not work at all...and the elements that you used for composition  for example my 1st impression looking the airplane and the drop-off area seems to looks like a mini airport ....but if you remove the airplane with all those buses looks like a good looking bus terminal.

I don't want to be hard on you but besides the artistic side but the impression that I'm getting is a bit off of the real intention of the project and the let me wondering that I'm looking at a little portion of the building to appreciate all the level of detail that you have there and the interesting spaces that you designed.

excellent Rhino skills as well.... I use rhino but only for organic shapes, to me it's much easier and faster design in Sketchup.





2017-04-01, 19:57:59
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FAZ

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I get it about the context and your renderings are beautiful but i think they are not showing very well your design skills. Most of the time you have to have renderings for different types of audiences... and you already have advantage for being architect/ designer with excellent visualization skills.
   there views from the artistic point of view are great but if you show this to investors, clients, city planners may not work at all...and the elements that you used for composition  for example my 1st impression looking the airplane and the drop-off area seems to looks like a mini airport ....but if you remove the airplane with all those buses looks like a good looking bus terminal.

I don't want to be hard on you but besides the artistic side but the impression that I'm getting is a bit off of the real intention of the project and the let me wondering that I'm looking at a little portion of the building to appreciate all the level of detail that you have there and the interesting spaces that you designed.

excellent Rhino skills as well.... I use rhino but only for organic shapes, to me it's much easier and faster design in Sketchup.

I understand your point, but this time i am not looking for sell a project, its explorative like the general way of learning on my university. I Know that the real Architecture World lamentably in general is about sell projects to clients, but becouse that, the Architecture loose social and context relations and the projects turn into objets that dont recognize particularities of each culture and places. And at least in my country, Architecture is teached from that mode, not from sell a objectos project. And the images was maded just for explore, learn, and try some different, i have other projects from you point of view in my behance, you can see that.
Thanks for your comment.
Regards.