Author Topic: CORONA LOFT  (Read 4622 times)

2017-03-02, 19:58:05

Fluss

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Here is my first portfolio render. Straight out VFB, no post-production. C&C are welcome.

2017-03-03, 01:45:04
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Juraj

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That cat :- D

I think the table as primary composition focus needs something on it. Esp. since the decoration on the bookcase and those two pots overwhelm it without it.
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2017-03-03, 12:39:55
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R.I.P kitty.

Using cg animals is a riksy thing.

2017-03-03, 13:46:42
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Fluss

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That cat :- D

I think the table as primary composition focus needs something on it. Esp. since the decoration on the bookcase and those two pots overwhelm it without it.

Thanks for the feedback Juraj, it's appreciated. I've made some changes.

R.I.P kitty.

Using cg animals is a riksy thing.

Indeed, the cat looks a little bit... well ... dead.. BUT they do IRL, almost all of them -> https://www.google.fr/search?q=sleeping+cat&safe=off&rlz=1C1CHBF_frFR728FR728&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi729HcqbrSAhUqJ8AKHZ7JBwcQ_AUICCgB&biw=2560&bih=1261

2017-03-03, 14:31:02
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Now that poor little fella is really dead - he's even lost his whiskers :[
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2017-03-03, 16:22:44
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Haha, that's a bug, sometimes they don't appear on render, i don't know why. I checked, they were in the scene, unhidden. Rerender solve the issue.

2017-03-03, 16:35:41
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Maybe it's a Schrodinger's cat? It is dead and a live at the same time. Same goes to the whiskers - they are there, yet they don't render :]
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2017-03-03, 16:48:15
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Fluss

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Maybe it's a Schrodinger's cat?

I've learned something today ! 😃 Let's say it's a Schrodinger's cat

2017-03-03, 17:23:51
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Everything okay except the cat//
Cat's never sleep in this position, putting his ear on the cold concrete floor:))Or putting ear on the floor at all//
You must trust me, i have two cat's:)))
it is necessary to put a mat or small carpet:))
Something like this:)Zbrush,Corona
« Last Edit: 2017-03-03, 17:55:10 by denisgo22 »

2017-03-03, 17:35:53
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Fluss

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There is a floor heating system 😊.

And Schrodinger's cat sleep like this

« Last Edit: 2017-03-03, 17:52:27 by Fluss »