Author Topic: A song for the dark side  (Read 3833 times)

2016-11-17, 02:54:01

lightmansor

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A song for the dark side - no post
« Last Edit: 2016-11-17, 03:04:17 by lightmansor »

2016-11-17, 08:02:06
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Christa Noel

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haha.. nice idea!
some dirt on the piano would be nice and the black keys seems has too much height :)

2016-11-17, 12:18:13
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The idea is really nice, so I think it could be turned into a masterpiece simply by:
-slightly changing the cropping (there is too little space left for the trooper, towards the right side)
-working more on the materials - the wooden planks look nice, but the bump map is too strong, generally most objects, including the main character, lack reflectivity
-working on lighting and post processing to define the general atmosphere of the image
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2016-11-18, 01:19:19
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lightmansor

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Nice tips Maru!
I'll hone some things! Thanks so much!

P.S.Nothing better than talking to a Corona grandmaster ;)

2016-11-18, 01:20:04
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nice idea! Thkx!!

haha.. nice idea!
some dirt on the piano would be nice and the black keys seems has too much height :)

2016-11-18, 11:52:47
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Also ST armours are more shiny
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