Author Topic: Icodyne WIPs  (Read 7297 times)

2016-11-13, 21:31:29

Icodyne

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Hello, Everyone!

I'm a new Corona user looking to get into ArchViz. This thread is for my WIPs and any questions I may have. Comments and criticism are always welcome. Enjoy and thanks for viewing!
« Last Edit: 2017-01-23, 05:04:25 by Icodyne »
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2016-11-13, 21:50:05
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Looking good for a first try. We have a dedicated board for tests. I'll move it your topic there if you don't mind.
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2016-11-14, 02:15:58
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Looking good for a first try. We have a dedicated board for tests. I'll move it your topic there if you don't mind.

No worries. Thanks for moving my post to the proper board. Also thanks for the feedback. :)
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2016-11-17, 03:55:13
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Tried a different sun angle on this one, plus adjusted the white paint's albedo to a more realistic level.
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2016-12-26, 05:33:19
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Here's a test render of the interior with some vegetation. Thanks to Johny Mrazko for the hydrangea plant and vase!
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2017-01-01, 18:25:20
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Putting more vegetation in the scene. I redid the interior render, and I did an exterior render as well. I know I went a bit overboard with the trees, but I'm enjoying playing with my new toy. ;) I think I need to tweak the grass a bit; perhaps less density?
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2017-01-03, 21:46:17
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New exterior rendering. This time with a different Corona Scatter setting for a less crowded feeling.
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2017-01-04, 12:45:09
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New exterior rendering. This time with a different Corona Scatter setting for a less crowded feeling.

1 - composition definetly need more air.
2 - collors are burned. There is a number of overburned higlights and overcontrasted shadows. I belive you should put some efort in lithing.

BTW - it all can be easily pulled using VFB new features like Filmic highlights and filmic shadows.

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2017-01-07, 15:51:23
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1 - composition definetly need more air.
2 - collors are burned. There is a number of overburned higlights and overcontrasted shadows. I belive you should put some efort in lithing.

BTW - it all can be easily pulled using VFB new features like Filmic highlights and filmic shadows.

PS - sorry for the grammar.

Thanks for the feedback, Nekrobul! That Filmic highlights tip helped a lot. And the denoise feature is fantastic.

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2017-01-16, 13:42:35
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Here's another interior shot. This time I got to play with DOF.
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2017-01-23, 05:03:50
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Exterior evening render.
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