MOCA Kitchen/home

[aliyahsavannah]

Please provide feedback....sorry for the delay. Here is another render.

[lacilaci]

It's good.

Oversaturated flooring drawing too much attention a little too bumpy wall plaster, and more views would help to see what the kitchen corner has to offer... It's good, just not too interresting... I guess...

[aliyahsavannah]

I was thinking the same thing regards to the floor. Thank you.

[FORM32]

Technically nice aside from the two points mentioned by lacilaci.

Big thing for me is the view itself, I think you could get some really nice shots from this scene by working on a more interesting composition. Currently there's no particular focal point and your eye just wanders around the scene. A quick google search will bring up loads of articles about composition. If you do make some changes and provide more views then post them here again, it would be interesting to see the difference

[aliyahsavannah]

Agreed. I have made some modification to the model  and I will add more views soon.  Thanks for the feedback.

[aliyahsavannah]

I have modified the scene some what. I am hoping to get the floor and dining room done some time soon.

[aliyahsavannah]

Guys, I just want to share this project that I am currently working on. For the past few weeks, I have taken the time to review all the models that I have worked on.  The biggest problem was detail, lighting etc. Here is another project and I am hoping with time I can run with the big boys!

[JacopoGrosso]

Now that saturation is lower it's more realistic :)