Author Topic: Heineken  (Read 5606 times)

2013-07-25, 16:47:04

ondrike

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Hi guys,

I just finish this one piece for my portfolio and of course it´s done with corona :)
Corona brought joy to sad world of 3Ds Max :)

2013-07-25, 18:50:38
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maru

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I think there are too many water drops or they are placed too uniformly. And proportions of the bottle look strange, as if it was very short or had a very wide neck. But overall it looks good.
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2013-07-25, 20:30:59
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Alan

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very nice ondrike! How you did these drops??

2013-07-25, 21:46:53
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ondrike

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maru : thank you, this bottle i used as the reference image and as you can see, neck is really wide

Alan : I´m glad you like it. water drops are 3 different types of drops scattered over the bottle surface
Corona brought joy to sad world of 3Ds Max :)

2013-07-25, 21:55:10
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Ludvik Koutny

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Looks more like kiwi lemonade :)

2013-07-25, 22:43:52
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ondrike

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oh sh*t I forgot to add reference picture
Corona brought joy to sad world of 3Ds Max :)

2013-07-26, 09:40:15
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I´m with Maru on this one. There are far to many waterdrops and a lot of them pointing into the wrong direction ;-) There is still some way to go to reach the reference. Besides that, nice work. Keep it up :-)

LG
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