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[Jadefox]

Hi there
My latest exterior render
Please criticise hard , only way I get better

[chartensimage]

Hi!

As you wish:

Pros:

1. Street looks awesome.
2. Transition between paths and grass looks good to me.

Cons:
1. Car shading is unconvincing and without depth of field I see no point in putting it in the scene this way. It doesn't give nice point of reference in composition as it probably was intended to.
2. Materials on the elevation of the house are "flat" and look like they do not reflect any light.
3. Woman is totally bad lit and reduntant in my opinion.
4. Jumping dog behind the bush is kind of funny and redundant as well.
5. Grass looks like it's a displace but still it looks flat thus we cannot see neither the translucency nor reflection of the sky in it.

That's all that comes to my mind.

[Jadefox]

Hi there

@chartensimage    Thanks for pointing it out all valid points and areas that I can work on

Kind regards

[romullus]

Also try to match shadows in photo and CG elements, as difference in lighting angle between different elements is quite easy to spot.

[F13Design]

Good start. I like all the valid points made by others. The other thing I thought of when looking at this rendering is that it would be nice to see a different sun angle so that you can show off some of the set back so to the house using shadows from the sun.