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2016-03-13, 10:39:15

mikenz

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Hi Guys

I'm a self taught hobbyist using C4D for a while now and just recently discovered Corona. I'm quite happy with how this has turned out so far - although there is plenty more work to be done to the scene. I would really like as much C&C as possible :) This is a raw render with no post work done what so ever.

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Mike, NZ

2016-03-16, 00:15:28
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Nejc Kilar

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Looking great already man! I think you really did well :)

Since you want some C&C I am just going to go ahead and list a few things that I think you could possibly look into.

- I think you could add more detail and randomness to the strawberries. The silhouette of them is sort of this perfect sphere that got deformed. I think if you would spend even more time on them that they would look even more awesome. I'd look into maybe using the surface deformer and try pushing those things on the surface (sorry, forgot the word) in a little so that it affects the surface.
- Also, for the strawberries, I'd mix some subtle displacement on them, make them just a tiny more "imperfect" and at the same I'd add some extra detail to the reflection / glossiness maps.  That would really bring out their detail. Adding SSS to those bad boys would just top it all of imho.
- The little water drops on the glass look really cool but maybe if they'd be more reflective, stand out more, It might be even awesomer.
- Maybe I'd try making the corn a little bit translucent / SSSed.
- Perhaps a slight reflection irregularity should be present on the ceramic bowl thing.

That's mostly what I can think of right now. Man, its looking great already but if you want to add even more detail into maybe the above will help.

Happy Coronauting!
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