Author Topic: Country yard house !  (Read 3391 times)

2016-01-26, 23:07:18

neox00

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Hello

here is my last exterior pratice render , i had this scene modeled and wanted to try it on corona first , it's still not very detailed
i would appreciate your kind comments , i am still on the newbies learners side.

2016-01-28, 22:16:32
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neox00

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since this is my practice test i am posting night shots i am still not satisfied with the result yet ...

2016-01-29, 09:34:59
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romullus

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This looks not bad at all, especially day shots. Things you may want to improve: add few more different grass models to bring some variety to lawn, scatter some pebbles, small rocks, debris on gravel surface, accurately paint wetness map, model terrace planks with geometry, add some obstacles to block horizon view, straighten verticals in night33 camera shot.

Be aware though, if you'll decide to do this changes, i'll move your topic to WIP board ;]
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2016-02-03, 15:26:25
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Take a look at the Corona Scatter tutorial on youtube, its quite helpful. The Z translation trick will help you hiding the background. I would also suggest using a bit of DOF. Anyway, congrats its a pretty cool set!