Author Topic: My first short animation done with 3ds max and corona render  (Read 5638 times)

2016-01-26, 14:02:06

genius3

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2016-01-26, 14:18:27
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Ludvik Koutny

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On the technical side, it's really well done. But next time, you could try something more original :) Your amazing technical and artistic skill will come out even better if you combine it with your own original ideas, rather that getting strongly inspired by already existing ones ;)

2016-01-26, 14:25:28
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genius3

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Thank you!  this is just test work next work i will think original ideas
sorry for bad english translate from google :)

2016-01-26, 14:55:21
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2016-01-26, 15:33:56
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wow... you must have spend years just for the modeling. Animation is realy cool. I like the start line part where every car is howling and nervously moving wheels.

But i agree whith Rawalanche. If i would make such an effort i would try to come up with something, that is as much incompareble as possible. Looking at this it direktly reminds me of a Video from pantural, done with v ray some years ago. (
) and, of Course transformers. Don't get me wrong. This Video is super impressive. I would and could never want and do something like that.

2016-01-26, 23:43:49
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Nice work. Liked the modeling and animation. Did u use a render farm or u rendered on your pc? Also care to share your CPU hardware setup?

If photorealism is what you were going for, a couple of very subtle dirt, dust, and blemishes on the car glasses, metal parts and even scratches,wear and tear on the tyres and wheel covers could have helped. The vehicles look too clean. Also, the transformer robot looks too clean, especially in an environment where speed most likely will develop some dust.

But it is possible a super clean  look is what you were going for.


2016-01-27, 08:26:50
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Impressive work! Well done. It may be too clean, but I like this estetics.

2016-01-28, 03:33:51
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very solid demo reel.  the simulation and animation of the cars are awesome!