House in the woods WIP

[bryanwrx]

Hello guys here's an wip personal project i'v been working on and off in my free time.

Critics r welcome.

Program used: corona, growfx

[arqrenderz]

the exterior has potential, doy you use some denoiser??

[bryanwrx]

Nope no denoiser atm

[rambambulli]

the exterior has potentia

indeed. I think you have to check your foliage materials though.
They seem to lack  translucency and have too much saturation and a sharp glossiness.
Did you build the materials yourself or did you convert them?

[bryanwrx]

All the greeneries I modeled myself with growfx. Yes the gloss is the sharp atm gonna reduce it.

[bryanwrx]

Different angle shots with greeneries improvement.

[maru]

It is starting to look very nice, but since the "woods" is the main theme here, I think you should put more effort to make the trees look better.
a) the models are not very great - the bottom branches look strange, low poly
b) the blurry background is really bad, it doesn't look natural, and there should be virtually no DOF when shooting with such wide angle
If you are having problems with hiding the background, you could put some big objects in the background, like some large rocks, or you could also try to make the ground have various height, like a side of a hill.

[romullus]

Those ropes alongside pathway, is perfect recipe for disaster ;]

[bryanwrx]

It is starting to look very nice, but since the "woods" is the main theme here, I think you should put more effort to make the trees look better.
a) the models are not very great - the bottom branches look strange, low poly
b) the blurry background is really bad, it doesn't look natural, and there should be virtually no DOF when shooting with such wide angle
If you are having problems with hiding the background, you could put some big objects in the background, like some large rocks, or you could also try to make the ground have various height, like a side of a hill.

Thnks for the feedback.
a) i will fix the branches
b) thnks i will do something with back ground maybe like u said some hills and low poly treeas in the back

[lujianhui520]

Hello guys here's an wip personal project i'v been working on and off in my free time.

Critics r welcome.

Program used: corona, growfx

hi
Can borrow your files to learn. Help me with my progress