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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: mutilo on 2018-11-07, 18:30:06

Title: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-07, 18:30:06

Hi guys,
I'm making this wip of a pool and I need your help to make it more beautiful, since I'm not as good as you ...
Thanks in advance for the advice.

C4D.

Andrea

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-09, 14:30:47

Hi,

I put a little up where I modified some material (wood and floors), applied the sss method to the duck, brought the camera to 1.40cm and resized the image, rotated the hdri and inserted some light bulb. The only thing that still has not managed well is the material of the umbrellas on which I am still working. Finally if I have time left over a couple of day views, I wanted to do some night.

Still nothing PS and VFB

C & C always welcome.

Thank you
Andrea

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-09, 18:10:32

another view

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: maru on 2018-11-12, 16:55:07

It's starting to look good, quite "photographic", maybe because of no artificial over-sharpening and over-saturation. It's hard to judge it as a whole right now, because of those unfinished objects (like the umbrella, chairs, etc.).
I would suggest to:
-add some kind of fog - https://help.c4d.corona-renderer.com/support/solutions/articles/12000035577
-randomize grass and tree colors a bit (not sure if there is Corona Multi Map already in C4D :) )
-the duck should be definitely yellow ;)
-the wood materials look ok, but not convincing, maybe they should be more or less reflective? or maybe you can try with different hues, or making the wood darker?

Just some random ideas.

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-12, 17:57:10

Hello
thank you very much for the advice. I'm already making changes and updates.
fingers crossed

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-12, 18:08:22

waiting to try the volume I bring an image that has just been made.

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-16, 10:51:11

Hi guys,
this is my last step, of images by day, pros pros will be at night.
I hope I have improved the image and that it can be to your liking.

C & C

Andrea

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: Beanzvision on 2018-11-16, 12:22:21

Hi, I agree with Maru that these are coming together nicely. I would consider ditching the SSS on the duck though as it makes it look solid. I think you will get a better look using translucency instead. ;)

(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=22335.0;attach=93743;image)

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-16, 16:43:33

Quote from: beanzvision on 2018-11-16, 12:22:21

Hi, I agree with Maru that these are coming together nicely. I would consider ditching the SSS on the duck though as it makes it look solid. I think you will get a better look using translucency instead. ;)

(https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=22335.0;attach=93743;image)

thank you Beanzvision
what kind of percentage did you use for your trial? or what kind of settings did you use?
I work with c4d.

however I will do some tests.

See you soon.

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: Beanzvision on 2018-11-16, 17:45:14

I can't check right now but I'll post my settings when I can. You can tweak it from there. I'm C4D too ;)

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-19, 09:24:25

Hi guys,
these are the nocturnal images, good vision :)

Andrea

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: Beanzvision on 2018-11-19, 13:54:54

Here's my quick plastic mockup.

Title: Re: Wip Pool
Post by: mutilo on 2018-11-19, 15:01:33

Quote from: beanzvision on 2018-11-19, 13:54:54

Here's my quick plastic mockup.

Thank you so much for the file, very kind