Author Topic: Florida Apartment 2015 Kitchen CGI  (Read 1931 times)

2015-04-11, 23:38:15

i313lluminance

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Hi! Here is my last Commercial CGI of a kitchen rendered with Corona. If you would like to share your opinion I will be glad.

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« Last Edit: 2015-04-13, 12:18:33 by i313lluminance »

2015-04-12, 15:50:06
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Overall I really like it.

Only comments would be:

1. It looks like you have an AO pass, which is a little too heavy. The shadow line specially in the ceiling feels weird to me.. its too big and too much for how much light there is in the shot.

2. The splashback, though I really like the look of it, I think the randomization is too much. One looks like it's about to fall off the wall.

But other than that, it's simple, effective and nice. 

Do be careful with the amount of grain... it's OK, but it is noisy.  I guess it depends on your client too.

Anyway, great work! keep it up! :)