Day Scene

[awaismalik]

Hi guys

Please critics and comments.. i really need them For Good Work
Thanks :)

[londonvisuals]

Dude ... I don't want to be rude or something but really ... ?
Someone i one of your earlier topics elaborated widely on what you should improve and you improved nothing !
All you seem to do is to open some ready made scenes convert them to Corona using widely known script, render the scene and ask for criticism.
Oh and by the way, good work is not about using instagram filters on your renders. It's much more complicated.

[yagi]

well said londonvisuals.... it also feels more like your looking for attention other than improvement from your numerous posts. honestly, you should try sticking to WIP until your ready Sir.

[awaismalik]

Yea He said Right... this is not my model and as i said i am still learning corona so that's why i am just using other people model but i did material and lighting again. so is it bad tell me ? anyway thanks for your comments :)

[maru]

You could be more specific on which parts of the image we should comment. Or you can just ask about the problems that you have. For example: hey guys, I have some problem with lighting/texturing/corona settings.

[awaismalik]

ok Maru Bro i will Ask :) Thank you

[gerbilho]

Images are too dark. Maybe underexposed or blacks are too crushed in post.
Too much dof in the dof image.
I don't like the floor texture.
The ceiling seems too high which make the furniture look out of proportion.