Chocolate

[awaismalik]

Hi everyone

Here is my Another Scene done with Corona
Criticism and comment For Make My Render More Good.
Thanks.

[maru]

Very quick notes:
-post processing is strange - highlights look grayish
-everything is out of focus (or is it compression?)
-the closest edge of the chocolate bar from the camera looks strange, I think it should be softer
-everything is brown, I think some colour variation would do good

[awaismalik]

Thank You for reply I am still learning corona Render I will try to make Perfect soon

[ragnakim]

the shot looks cool in the aspect of how things are displayed, but the image lacks sharpness (too much dof maybe?), and the chocolate in the dry part look 2 shynie. and the metal foil should be more thin.

keep up the good work :)