Author Topic: First try  (Read 2378 times)

2016-12-23, 16:06:42

polyrig

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Hi
I am new to corona and this is my first image.The main thing that impressed me was its speed. It reduces the work of post processing too. I think i am gonna start using corona from now on. I want your feedback on this image.I really wanna improve.

Softwares : 3ds max 14, corona , photoshop

2016-12-23, 16:55:41
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Shawn Astrom

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Looks really great. I would just let it cook a little longer and use the denoiser to remove any bright pixels. Also the lamp shade look a little odd maybe play around with the translucency on the lamp shade. Also I would maybe try a different focal length but that's more of a personal preference. Awesome first render with Corona!

2017-01-08, 13:22:44
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polyrig

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Thanks for your feed back. I'll try to improve

2017-01-08, 16:25:31
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Noah45

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nice render! There are several odd perspective clues (tree, leaning frames, and cam focal)
and a glare variation, nice.
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