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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Emilia R on 2015-08-11, 00:55:02

Title: Summer house
Post by: Emilia R on 2015-08-11, 00:55:02

Hi guys this is my firs work here, so what do you think? Any critique or advices appreciated.

Title: Re: Summer house
Post by: maru on 2015-08-11, 11:37:22

Very very nice. I love the color grading as it's not overdone.

Title: Re: Summer house
Post by: spadestick on 2015-08-11, 14:53:43

fantastic job on the house, yes, good colour grading, but personally a little more black would be nice as it seems a little faded in parts. The tree leaves in the 2 foreground trees give the scene away. What happens if you remove the 2 front trees altogether? the foreground bush is looking great, much better than the trees. I guess the trees look a little too CG, either by modelling or texturing. Or maybe move the camera in so you do see the trees but still have the shadows?

Title: Re: Summer house
Post by: ska on 2015-08-12, 14:31:41

my opinion:
+50 to saturation = PERFECT!

btw great mood!

Title: Re: Summer house
Post by: pmcf1981 on 2015-08-12, 16:09:33

top i think is perfect

Title: Re: Summer house
Post by: mitviz on 2015-08-24, 21:55:04

perfect image! exteriors are getting better and better