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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Sergey Kolbasnikov on 2015-06-17, 11:45:42
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My sketchbook.
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This is completely amazing! The only things that give away it's a render are:
-the spool (looks kind of fake)
-duplicated jars in the background
-low polys visible close to the center of the book, on the page edges
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Agree with Maru, amazing work! Maru is on point re: the spoon. The diffuse seems to almost glow or burn somehow.
-duplicated jars in the background
Come on, they are out of focus, you simply cannot tell if they are duplicates because of the shape alone! It's a practical decision to use the same fixed size jar when storing something :)
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Agree with Maru, amazing work! Maru is on point re: the spoon. The diffuse seems to almost glow or burn somehow.
The "spoon" looks ok for me. What I meant is the spooL - the round thing with thread wrapped around. :)
-duplicated jars in the background
Come on, they are out of focus, you simply cannot tell if they are duplicates because of the shape alone! It's a practical decision to use the same fixed size jar when storing something :)
Yeah, and the amount of honey differs, which is good, but they look so uniform, maybe one of them could be knocked over, or broken, or with no cap, or something. :)
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that honey material is just perfect. great job man.
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Gallery worth material! Very nice image.
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yup, already reported along with this one :)
https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=5319.0;attach=21673;image
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Hi guys! Thank you for your feedback. I'm sorry, I really difficult to write in English (((
maru All comments on the case and even more)))
vkiuru Thank you!
cgdigi Really nice to read your comments!
romullus, maru Thank you! Is it possible to send more materials in the mail?
Once again I apologize for my English(((
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romullus, maru Thank you! Is it possible to send more materials in the mail?
Sure, you can contact us at info@corona-renderer.com with your gallery submissions.
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Nicely done !
I agree with maru about repetition of the pots, give them to me haha.
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Amazing material. Great work
Best
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Wow. I really will love to know more about your shaders, they look amazing.
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very impressive! the honey looks amazing!
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Nice! Great materials, honey looks so real.
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brilliant job/
Only one question, how many time you rendering this Picture, for so amazing result for DOF, or this some trick in Photoshop and post processing/
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Very nice shading and lighting ;)
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Hi friends, here are some of my new works!
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One thing that stuck in my brain: " the cake is a lie"
Amaising artistic photorealism as always.
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Privet, Sergey!
Prekrasnaja rabota! :)
Anyway, you've heard tons of praises already, so I'll just point out a few things that tick me off so you can look out for them next time or fix them later if you feel like it :)
In the first batch (page 1): low poly book breaks the illusion when you notice it. The lime in the bottle render - looks plastic and badly warped, not too keen on the grasses there either. The chopping board - the wood looks to be made to match the kitchen design, but it looks plastic and manufactured - not a luxury real wood product. Deer antlers in the modern image - plastic, would prefer a more real texture for it, maybe even wood. Lantern - low poly, would prefer it smoother.
Second batch (page 2): Bump map on the bottle low res? It looks like it's pixelating the refraction. Label lower res too? The phone - low-poly - the rounded corners are very clearly low poly, would probably not pass at an ad agency due to this. The cake - chocolate sponge is clearly bump-mapped, lacks depth (especially rolling off into the distance) - maybe a displacement would be able to fix that?
And the biggest one - the fireflies and noise in the highlights and bokeh REALLY distract me. Personal opinion, of course, but I wish you'd left the renders to cook for a bit longer!
Remember - on real cameras (and I'm a working photographer too!) - the noise appears in the shadows and somewhat in the mids (depending on ISO), highlights remain pretty buttery smooth. So having a noisy bokeh highlight or a noisy specular is just wrong.
Otherwise your coffee cup is great, your honey shader is brilliant, the design is very nice - not much else to complain about there!
Take a look at using higher poly meshes (or using turbosmooth where appropriate or fixing in photoshop) for close-ups, tweak a few shaders as mentioned and you'll be right on the money :)
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That cherry material is spot on.
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images so good, they're almost like really good to eat...
I like the cake shot, nicely done on the top part with cherries...
Minor crit: bottom of cake that meets the plate - rather to clean/ too consistent edge (considering it's supposed to be some icing)
But overall really awesome images.
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Hi friends, here are some of my new works!
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Sergey, your renders are absolutely beautiful. Very nice work man!
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I'm speechless, the quality is mind blowing!
I have one question. What are the photomontages in this picture? https://forum.corona-renderer.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=8537.0;attach=41241;image
They strongly remind me of Superstudio works, which I always find intriguing. (http://butdoesitfloat.com/Negative-utopias-and-forewarning-images-of-the-horrors-which)
And these guys made it in 1960s!