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Title: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-11, 20:50:24

Hi, guys, I'm finishing a project here and I would really appreciate your opinion while I don't show to the client. Thank you! :) Rendered with Corona 1.0 and 3ds Max 2015!
Theres a lot more to come! A lot of angles! :):)

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-11, 22:55:08

Front camera angle

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: Freakaz on 2015-05-12, 08:54:14

Should be moved to the WIP's if it's  incomplete.
Add some subtle fog, and take care that the grass won't be growing through the terrace floor.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: fLuppster on 2015-05-12, 10:35:54

Nice, but way too much chromatic abberation.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: maru on 2015-05-12, 11:12:04

Definitely too much contrast and effects. Showing a raw render would make it easier to judge.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-12, 14:41:48

Yeah, well.. I thought it had too much effects but in the end I didnt know what to do. Here's a raw render.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: Freakaz on 2015-05-12, 14:53:50

I'd use warmer interior lighting with the contrast of cold blue global light for the starters. Dunno maybe it's just for me, but the bright white lights doesn't work .
here's an example of what kind of colour scheme i'm talking about.
http://c1038.r38.cf3.rackcdn.com/group5/building43503/media/kujk_dezeen_aresolbringenbywaldemarsonberglund_ss_7.jpg

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-12, 14:55:35

I tried to achieve this but in this image there's no trees and in mine theres a lot. So became different. If I let the ground white and take off the trees basically would be the same.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-12, 21:50:32

Well... I can't let those images without these bunch of effects. If you see the raw render it was fucked up already. So here's an Interior.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-05-13, 07:55:55

Try to at least to get rid of violet tint and those insane chromatic aberations. I think your client will not be happy if his\her eyes will burn away.

About collors. It is uncommon to use cold light sorces on night\evning renders it is better to use something like 2500\3200K

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-13, 15:11:48

Thank you!
I tried to achieve this light color cause its a reading room. Well... Here's another image with another mood. Please Critics are welcome!!!

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-05-13, 16:29:07

Much better now.

Just a little work with postpro and it will be great

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-13, 16:34:22

Man, had already post processed hehehe. But I liked your color correction... blue tones... and the contrast. Though a bit too much. But nice!!!

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-05-13, 16:42:26

It is just a sugestion to give it more of artistic look.

The contrast depends on monitor. I am using Dell U3011 ajusted for glossy paper print.

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-13, 20:15:45

Thank you man! Thanks for the attention and to help me. Great help you gave me. :)

Title: Re: Woods Cabin
Post by: diogovb on 2015-05-13, 21:44:21

Just to finish... here is my last image .. I don't know but It's not photorealistic. Can anyone say why? Thank you!