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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: Alex Abarca on 2015-04-23, 07:44:14

Title: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: Alex Abarca on 2015-04-23, 07:44:14

Besides the lateral distortion (ill fix in the end) and perspective view.

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: Dmitriy Yemelianenko on 2015-04-23, 11:55:55

Nice work. I would add some fog to better feel the depth of the building and some dirt on the road and facade. You also should lower the markers on the road or just paint them. I hope this will help.

Cheers!

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: Nekrobul on 2015-04-23, 13:57:38

Add some furniture in windows and some motion blurred people on the street using 3dsMAX populate tool.

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: ylucic on 2015-04-23, 19:43:10

i would try a different aspect ratio of the image just to play with ...a little more vertical. you could use the "overscan" script to do it and it will keep the camera position and rotation. and a bit farther away with more focal length ...so that honda doesn't get to distorted
also your could try to make the light coming from the right side, so it can be a little more bright below that metal stucture

:D

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: AnubisMe on 2015-04-23, 23:16:14

Cool building? where is it located?

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: Alex Abarca on 2015-04-23, 23:43:39

Thanks for the ideas, I get started with the comments...Im going to add AO from Mental Ray. The warm direct light I'll bust it in PS, lateral distortion too.

Building is located here.
https://www.google.com/maps/@34.3074416,-118.4131189,155m/data=!3m1!1e3

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: Freakaz on 2015-04-29, 12:45:13

Don't be lazy to draw a mask for parking lot lines and arrows. It sticks out from the asphalt to much and it's visible, that you used renderable splines. Also the trees on the right are to big, regarding their distance from the building (at least from the perspective it looks like there's like a 1 m distance). The branches will be touching the facade. 

Title: Re: Any ideas on what to do to improve this angle
Post by: machmirdenlukas on 2015-05-05, 23:19:39

nice Project
nice viz!
but get rid of the cars
and of that  too much-cg-arrows on the street
cheerz rob
otherwise..topnotch!