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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: bouhmidage on 2015-03-19, 23:36:04

Title: reading corner
Post by: bouhmidage on 2015-03-19, 23:36:04

for the first time i'm trying to apply translucency to my materials ( the tulip petals ), and tested it with natural daylight and a spot light. models are not mine . i set up all the textures parameters manually.
Hope you like it !!
critics and comments are welcome guys :D
(https://m1.behance.net/rendition/modules/162661193/hd/785de4387f814e07bfc6995b2fbee4fc.jpg)


(https://m1.behance.net/rendition/modules/162661195/hd/579f23bbec760cad5e9246f394fc6da9.jpg)


(https://m1.behance.net/rendition/modules/162661197/hd/6bb0194c994411f147d51988a7e321c3.jpg)

Title: Re: reading corner
Post by: WorkFlow on 2015-03-20, 08:47:59

Good Morning,

I really like the light setup and also how the translucency is showing through the tulips!

But you should improve the reflection of that brick wall - it should be really rough where the bricks are showing, and even a little less glossy where there is paint. Especiall bothering in the second (daylight) render!

Other than that, i think it's pretty good!

Title: Re: reading corner
Post by: maru on 2015-03-20, 09:16:17

This is an example of good use of translucency. :)

Title: Re: reading corner
Post by: bouhmidage on 2015-03-20, 14:14:38

Thank you Maru !!
WOrkflow : thank you , i'll fix the brick's roughness by the way , i need more practice :p