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Title: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-20, 19:39:15

Hello to all. My another commercial project. Bedroom & loggia as a part of private appartment in Kiev. 70 sq.meters
Lit by custom HDR (Peter Guthrie's HDR + another one for ground).
C&C are always welcome

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Buzzz on 2014-10-20, 22:22:47

Excellent work, good lighting and materials.

The bed is made of Marvelous? Very nice.

Wrinkles are displazamiento or bump?

Regards and thks!

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-20, 22:33:27

Quote from: Buzzz on 2014-10-20, 22:22:47

Excellent work, good lighting and materials.

The bed is made of Marvelous? Very nice.

Wrinkles are displazamiento or bump?

Regards and thks!

Hi. Thanks for comment. Bed made in Marvelous, but not by me. It is complete model from VIZ-People models.
Wrinkles are normal map texture. Its not hard to do

About materials, I probably need some more experience for them ). Not all of them are excellent ((

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Caue Rodrigues on 2014-10-20, 22:38:43

Very nice, 72 foot square is not a large apartment. But is decoration is great and mood is cozy.

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-20, 23:09:25

Quote from: crawlewis on 2014-10-20, 22:38:43

Very nice, 72 foot square is not a large apartment. But is decoration is great and mood is cozy.

Thanks! Check your PM

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Zeus on 2014-10-20, 23:22:05

Good renders! First picture the most realistic.

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-20, 23:27:46

Quote from: Zeus on 2014-10-20, 23:22:05

Good renders! First picture the most realistic.

Thank you very much )

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Zeus on 2014-10-20, 23:42:29

You used multi/sub object for coffee material ? I mean white foam on coffee.

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-20, 23:49:35

Quote from: Zeus on 2014-10-20, 23:42:29

You used multi/sub object for coffee material ? I mean white foam on coffee.

Nope. Its just 1 full texture projected on circle plane

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Tom Zamorin on 2014-10-21, 00:22:39

The first picture especially was pleasant
Because in a shot there are more than details and illumination is more accurate

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-21, 00:56:47

Quote from: Tom Zamorin on 2014-10-21, 00:22:39

The first picture especially was pleasant
Because in a shot there are more than details and illumination is more accurate

Thanks, Tom

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Image Box Studios on 2014-10-21, 08:09:18

Hi..very nice renders...good work.

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-21, 08:29:09

Quote from: Image Box Studio on 2014-10-21, 08:09:18

Hi..very nice renders...good work.

Thank you very much! )
Maybe somebody give advice what to do better?

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-22, 01:11:45

UP )

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: Tom Zamorin on 2014-10-22, 01:24:16

Applause you wait?
Minus to a karma...
UPing in gallery should be works

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-22, 12:15:14

Quote from: Tom Zamorin on 2014-10-22, 01:24:16

Applause you wait?
Minus to a karma...
UPing in gallery should be works

What you talking about? What applause?
I'm  asking about some advices.
Read my previous post, plz...

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: rambambulli on 2014-10-22, 17:43:40

Okay, iMotion I'm wondering what you want to tell with your images.
It looks to much like a clean registration of a small space. The materials are great but the lighting could use more depth to show the small space appears bigger as it actually might be. If this is something you want to tell of course :)
The media is turned on so there must be somebody in the room but I can't see their is any life (except from the first image. Somebodies coffee is getting cold there).

So if you want some constructive critisism than I would say that you use the light and composition to tell a story not renders of a clean registration of a space.

Title: Re: Bedroom+Loggia
Post by: iMotion on 2014-10-22, 20:48:11

Quote from: rambambulli on 2014-10-22, 17:43:40

Okay, iMotion I'm wondering what you want to tell with your images.
It looks to much like a clean registration of a small space. The materials are great but the lighting could use more depth to show the small space appears bigger as it actually might be. If this is something you want to tell of course :)
The media is turned on so there must be somebody in the room but I can't see their is any life (except from the first image. Somebodies coffee is getting cold there).

So if you want some constructive critisism than I would say that you use the light and composition to tell a story not renders of a clean registration of a space.

Ok, thank you very much