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General Category => Gallery => Work in Progress/Tests => Topic started by: ren_guf on 2014-09-17, 15:36:07

Title: Interior DOF
Post by: ren_guf on 2014-09-17, 15:36:07

Hi Guys,
Some Experimental Interior Work with DOF

Title: Re: Interior DOF
Post by: Nekrobul on 2014-09-17, 22:49:20

Sorry dude but there is hard to say something about your work, there is waaaaaaaay to much things done wrong. Not only in lithing setup but also in modeling.

Title: Re: Interior DOF
Post by: maru on 2014-09-17, 22:52:00

This really doesn't look good but as it is a WIP, I will encourage you to improve it:
-What kind of DoF are you using? From Corona or done in post?
-the glass model doesn't look very good and it is placed very close to the camera so all its flaws are visible
-same applies to the bottle - ugly blurred textures
-windows have sharp edges - they should be blurred by DoF, too!
-the background bitmap is in poor resolution
-think about composition, why are the glass and bottle cut?