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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: chetib on 2014-08-21, 07:07:22

Title: house in the country
Post by: chetib on 2014-08-21, 07:07:22

Hi everyone,

This is my first render made ​​with Corona. Thank you for your comments.

Thanks

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: snakebox on 2014-08-21, 07:36:57

First of all, overall it looks good!

It does seem like the guy doesn't have any shadows?  Something doesn't seem right on the floor behind him..

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: tomislavn on 2014-08-21, 08:33:56

Cute concept overall, good work. Just missing some depth, maybe some ambient occlusion - its a tad flat in my opinion. Could work a bit on the wood material also :)

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: Image Box Studios on 2014-08-21, 10:34:36

hi...i have one suggestion...i think ceiling wooden beam are looking so heavy...

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: tomislavn on 2014-08-21, 10:40:36

Quote from: Image Box Studio International on 2014-08-21, 10:34:36

hi...i have one suggestion...i think ceiling wooden beam are looking so heavy...

Yeah kinda out of proportion a bit :)

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: crazyman on 2014-08-21, 10:57:05

Funny:) chromatic aberration in first picture, found it's way to time stamp of yours :)

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: chetib on 2014-08-21, 11:57:16

Thank you guys for all your comments. I take note and try to improve it. I apologize for my English! :)
tomislavn : I didn'tt make postprod. Just some color adjustment.

Thanks again

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: tomislavn on 2014-08-21, 12:17:36

Quote from: chetib on 2014-08-21, 11:57:16

Thank you guys for all your comments. I take note and try to improve it. I apologize for my English! :)
tomislavn : I didn'tt make postprod. Just some color adjustment.

Thanks again

Aaah ok :) sorry, figured it was a finished version so it was just a little bit of constructive criticism. Nice work overall :)

Title: Re: house in the country
Post by: chetib on 2014-08-21, 12:58:01

Thank you tomislavn. still a lot of improvement!