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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Freakaz on 2014-06-20, 07:32:22

Title: Interior in old town
Post by: Freakaz on 2014-06-20, 07:32:22

Hey guys, long time no post. So long, that i was lazy to search for my old "Galery" thread, so fire'ing up a new thread.
Latest apartment interior renderings done with corona.

Title: Re: Interior in old town
Post by: 3ds-shaman on 2014-06-20, 11:23:15

some work is good, you should pay attention to the materials and 3D models

Title: Re: Interior in old town
Post by: crazyman on 2014-06-20, 14:00:09

1:
overall good selection of colors, contrast etc.
- animal skin: bump and thickness missing, well done gloss
- thick white blanket: too "stiff"
- square pieces in door: more reflective?
2:
- right wall: gypsum sticking out
- carpet: fix flowers, do not use transparency shortcuts, does not look nice :)
4:
nice bloom
- terracotta too flat
5:
- again carpet and sticking out plaster
6:
- cat have white border around it
7:
- glass elements in door: could be done something to reflections and refraction? or lack of those?
8:
- give egg shell thickness and fix faceted shadows, could be issue with bump or smoothing groups
10:
- reflection in picture glass to much of waviness going on there
- also i believe Eames House Bird comes in black

Besides all above, well put together.

Title: Re: Interior in old town
Post by: maru on 2014-06-20, 14:59:40

Quote from: crazyman on 2014-06-20, 14:00:09

- animal skin: bump and thickness missing, well done gloss

I think it's just a photo texture with reflection...

These eggs must be from minecraft chickens.