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Title: Cucina
Post by: jasgeka on 2014-05-30, 23:38:59

300 pases

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: romullus on 2014-05-31, 00:54:43

Lovely image. I would go with little bit more glossy reflections here and there, but overall looks very good... and fresh :]

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: jasgeka on 2014-05-31, 09:20:43

Thanks*)

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: klipanos on 2014-05-31, 10:41:10

Nice design!!! I like it!!!!

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: Fibonacci on 2014-05-31, 13:11:43

Hi,

How I see:

The models and the modeling is good.

But...the next is for me...not soo good. Sorry mate...

- Use more glossy reflects for the woods
- the metalson the table  is like an mirror, just give mor less Fresenel IOR
- the wine in the Gaja...where is it?  ;)
- the scale on the curtain is wrong
- the knifes close to the windows...there is no reflection
- color of the sink ?
- the ceiling...I think the gap is too much between the planks
- The light is too bright, the shadows too
- Wippeng cloth on the table ??? Just scale the texture, or change it for something colored, striped...something else than this, because now it's look like...an...


Sorry for if you fell yourself uncomfortable now. I'm just lisening and learning...

Cheers!

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: jasgeka on 2014-05-31, 15:57:58

Thanks for the comment, your instructions on my mistakes are particularly valuable for me)

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: vkiuru on 2014-06-01, 08:54:51

The lens distortion is too much I think but apart from that it looks really good. Especially the lighting.

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: benjamincillo on 2014-06-01, 15:07:17

For me, there are too many distractor elements on the table

also, I woul suggest to use DOF
:)

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: jasgeka on 2014-06-18, 08:30:10

Thank them all) On this picture add corona AO material) Wait your critical comments) Buon giorno a tutti)

Title: Re: Cucina
Post by: Fibonacci on 2014-08-30, 11:09:13

Hi,
Hi,


Well this is much better ! Well done!

Only two things of me...( maybe just I see )

First of all for me the panels on the ceiling is too straight and i think if you use different saturation for the textures and  push the UVs should be more realistic. There is never same tones in the real wood, expect that is plastic covered....

Another one...wood ! :D For the cupboard the wood's texture is not really good... I mean you should to change something looks like real wood...with vains...Or this one you should to scale it down in the UVs...And tweek the materials because the reflection is too balanced...But if this is plastic covered...than ok! ;)