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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: awaismalik on 2014-05-20, 16:32:51

Title: Day Scene
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-20, 16:32:51

Hi guys

Please critics and comments.. i really need them For Good Work

Thanks :)

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: londonvisuals on 2014-05-21, 00:19:56

Dude ... I don't want to be rude or something but really ... ?
Someone i one of your earlier topics elaborated widely on what you should improve and you improved nothing !
All you seem to do is to open some ready made scenes convert them to Corona using widely known script, render the scene and ask for criticism.
Oh and by the way, good work is not about using instagram filters on your renders. It's much more complicated.

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: yagi on 2014-05-21, 12:29:06

well said londonvisuals.... it also feels more like your looking for attention other than improvement from your numerous posts. honestly, you should try sticking to WIP until your ready Sir.

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-21, 13:37:23

Yea He said Right... this is not my model and as i said i am still learning corona so that's why i am just using other people model but i did material and lighting again. so is it bad tell me ? anyway thanks for your comments :)

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: maru on 2014-05-21, 13:42:43

You could be more specific on which parts of the image we should comment. Or you can just ask about the problems that you have. For example: hey guys, I have some problem with lighting/texturing/corona settings.

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-21, 13:49:28

ok Maru Bro i will Ask :) Thank you

Title: Re: Day Scene
Post by: gerbilho on 2014-05-22, 18:37:46

Images are too dark. Maybe underexposed or blacks are too crushed in post.
Too much dof in the dof image.
I don't like the floor texture.
The ceiling seems too high which make the furniture look out of proportion.