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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: awaismalik on 2014-05-18, 21:02:10

Title: First Floor Room
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-18, 21:02:10

Hi Guys,
i am still learning so please comments for helping me to learn more :)
Thanks

Title: Re: First Floor Room
Post by: jhindley on 2014-05-19, 22:27:09

I'm not yet up and running with Corona as I wait (sort of) patiently for the new build

I am very excited and seeing the excellent standard of work on only makes it worse

I think this render is nice

Instead of rendering and the technology which you clearly have a handle on ill focus on detail

Maybe make fabric pulls and surface undulations on those chairs unique from each other. The chairs occupy a very prominent position in the shot

The book stack on the table - all the same lets have some variation
Let's have some spine art

The skirting board runs outside - not sure this is something I'd do as an architect

Your floor runs very tight to the base of the window frame. Any chance of a small gap at base of window 5mm / 10mm

Not sure your top down view is as successful as the elevation views

Keep it up buddy - it looks ace