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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: awaismalik on 2014-05-17, 15:09:15

Title: Exterior Day
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-17, 15:09:15

Hi Guys Hope you like it Comments And criticism will make my work perfect!
Thanks  :D

Title: Re: Exterior Day
Post by: jhindley on 2014-05-17, 16:02:52

hi

not sure whats causing it but looks like there are different components of that first image where the scale is off.
Part looks full size
the car doesn't look real
there are parts of the image that look like a scale model

Sorry i cant be more constructive but there are just elements in this image that throw off its sense of realism
its almost like a game map on counterstrike or something

keep going mate

Title: Re: Exterior Day
Post by: maru on 2014-05-17, 17:08:57

Yeah, jhindley is right, this looks like in-game footage because:

-there isn't much attention to detail
-there is almost no reflectivity - stone walls/floors should have at least SOME reflectivity
-generally, most shaders are very simple, maybe even diffuse-only?
-I think it would be impossible for a cobble floor to get wavy
-plants need more reflectivity and translucency
-post processing makes it look like a scene from a movie where someone is in a dream
-DOF looks unnatural