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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: awaismalik on 2014-05-14, 23:26:28

Title: Corona Render Day & Night
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-14, 23:26:28

Hi Guys
Here is my Corona Day n Night Scene.
Criticism and comment For Make My Render More Good.
Thanks.

Title: Re: Corona Render Day & Night
Post by: gerbilho on 2014-05-15, 02:53:27

The wooden flor bump is not good. Seems you're using the diffuse map in bump slot, am I right? Looks bad...try to use a better bump map.
The floor looks plastic, maybe increase glossiness...
Your last images are very compressed/low quality.
Overall I think you are improving.

Title: Re: Corona Render Day & Night
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-15, 09:01:37

thanks for reply, yes i did use diffuse map in bump slot, but i will update this scene thanks you for help :)

Title: Re: Corona Render Day & Night
Post by: maru on 2014-05-15, 10:40:39

Looks like you are good at lighting but your scenes require more work with details.

-1st pic:  window hole is... just a hole with blinds over it, no window frame, no handles, etc. Maybe even no glass? Chairs by the table look ridiculously tiny in comparison with the bed, but maybe it's just an illusion. Shoes look tiny in comparison with bed, but maybe it's just a huge bed? Maybe contrast is a bit high, but maybe it makes it look more photographic. Background image is horrible.

-2nd pic - background image.... reflections in floor are too strong and colourful

-3rd pic - too much noise reduction and too much colourful post processing + flowers look plastic, they need translucency

-4th pic - "flat" materials, even metal door lock and handle are flat and non-reflective

Title: Re: Corona Render Day & Night
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-15, 14:56:36

Thank you for finding my mistake that will help me to improve my work :)