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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: awaismalik on 2014-05-08, 05:59:31

Title: Chocolate
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-08, 05:59:31

Hi everyone

Here is my Another Scene done with Corona
Criticism and comment For Make My Render More Good.
Thanks.

Title: Re: Chocolate
Post by: maru on 2014-05-08, 15:53:08

Very quick notes:
-post processing is strange - highlights look grayish
-everything is out of focus (or is it compression?)
-the closest edge of the chocolate bar from the camera looks strange, I think it should be softer
-everything is brown, I think some colour variation would do good

Title: Re: Chocolate
Post by: awaismalik on 2014-05-09, 00:33:22

Thank You for reply I am still learning corona Render I will try to make Perfect soon

Title: Re: Chocolate
Post by: ragnakim on 2014-05-09, 12:15:06

the shot looks cool in the aspect of how things are displayed, but the image lacks sharpness (too much dof maybe?), and the chocolate in the dry part look 2 shynie. and the metal foil should be more thin.

keep up the good work :)