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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: Art15 on 2014-05-05, 18:34:16

Title: Personal home project 2
Post by: Art15 on 2014-05-05, 18:34:16

Hi everyone

Here is my latest project done with Mode and Corona
Criticism and comment are welcome.

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_8afvcttuac7kzenwghq4jfxoq.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_rv5wsc8ma5jwoxrndz5yi_uoz.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_tmr_qsgwbshynedcfaoplaldk.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_sgwkyco8amjjcjn__5tq7fr3m.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_inrifw9it3felcn7fylam2z2g.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_bjjhjor7wjmrs6vefet7g_fjc.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_oqat_svnqlct4hobo2k3w4bky.jpg)

(http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/original_294300_bfcy9hohficccklvxnnxgqvas.jpg)

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: yagi on 2014-05-05, 19:26:57

hmmm..... photo-realistically noisy :D  but great effort nonetheless....

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2014-05-05, 19:30:38

Yeah... they seem extremely noisy...

Did you have noise problems? Or just didn't want to wait?

Did you use HDcache? And do you have any glass in windows? Does it have caustics enabled?

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: Cyanhide on 2014-05-05, 19:32:22

I think it need to back a bit longer in the oven, good setups, a bit to clean for my taste, but it has some cool elements.

+1 for Hans Wegner

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: Captain Obvious on 2014-05-05, 20:37:40

One crit would be that there's some pretty obvious texture tiling, especially on the wooden slats in the 3rd and 4th images. It looks like the texture is simply box-mapped on and projecting through. You really should make a proper UV map here and offset the slats in the UV space so they don't all look the same.

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: Stan_But on 2014-05-05, 22:54:19

interesting project but noise noise noise

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: subpixelsk on 2014-05-06, 07:41:08

I don´t like the perspective in 1st and 5th picture ..to me it´d seem better if verticals were pointing vertically

Title: Re: Personal home project 2
Post by: Art15 on 2014-05-06, 18:23:13

Hi everyone

Thank you for the tips and comments.

headoff, Cyanhide, yagi, yes, I also found it very noisy but it was not because I did not wait.

Rawalanche, I used the PT + PT for the outside and decided to use inside. I remade the image with HDcache mode and in less time produced a cleaner image.
The glass in the window are not enabled with caustics

Captain Obvious, I will improve on the next UV.

johnymrazko, thanks for the tip.