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Title: MS house living room
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-05-04, 16:14:18

MS house living room
Sftwares : 3dsmax 2013 , Corona A6 , and PS for final touch , Critics and comments are welcome !!

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: Chakib on 2014-05-04, 18:45:10

Nice, But i have some remarks :

- Since the lens dof in PS is not good, reduce it  it's too much here ( or use a good plugin for AE )
- Reflection on the pillow? just remove it.
- The carpet texture is low res it's visible.
- The plant is too saturated, if you used too much translucency reduce it.
- The Big bang picture is not scaled correctly ( circle )

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: hemrie on 2014-05-04, 20:28:11

I like the arrangment of the flowers on the table and the texture on the couch.

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-05-04, 21:11:49

thanks alot !! i'll correct thoose mistakes ! :D

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: Juraj on 2014-05-04, 21:27:14

Quote from: Chakib on 2014-05-04, 18:45:10

- The Big bang picture is not scaled correctly ( circle )

Sorry, couldn't help :- D Maybe it's intentional typo :- )

Good critique though, agree.

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: Ludvik Koutny on 2014-05-04, 21:43:15

I would go easy on saturation of plant and flowers materials :) In real world, they are a bit less saturated than you expect them to be, so you may want to make them look like plants, not some burning toxic acid :)

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: robo on 2014-05-05, 02:32:24

Quote from: Rawalanche on 2014-05-04, 21:43:15

I would go easy on saturation of plant and flowers materials :) In real world, they are a bit less saturated than you expect them to be, so you may want to make them look like plants, not some burning toxic acid :)

LOL, I mostly thing the one standing in the corner is problematic, needs some translucency as well since it looks like an imitation plant now.

Overall looks nice.
Apart from earlier mentioned things, I didn't really find the fish bowl convincing..

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-05-05, 21:12:25

i found this image at corona forum , sorry i had downloaded it and i forgot who is the author :/ , it could help regarding translucency correction

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: maru on 2014-05-05, 22:23:25

As far as I remember, there is no CoronaColorMapper in newest releases.
Depending on your textures, you can use the same bitmap as in diffuse slot or you can use Color Correct or some other plugin to give it some more "juice". :)

Title: Re: MS house living room
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-05-06, 11:52:20

ok !! i have to try it ;)