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General Category => Gallery => Topic started by: bouhmidage on 2014-03-31, 10:39:44

Title: Ronen beckerman MS house
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-03-31, 10:39:44

i made this render for a rendering competition organised in our architecture school , i used 3Ds max ( model from Ronen Beckerman blog) , the grass is from the fantastic itoo forest pack , rendered with Corona A6 , hope you like t !! any suggestions or comments are welcome

Title: Re: Ronen beckerman MS house
Post by: Dervish on 2014-04-01, 00:35:16

That Vignetting is too strong on the left. Tone it down and rocks needs some displacement or bump.

Title: Re: Ronen beckerman MS house
Post by: philbale on 2014-04-02, 18:04:15

Personally I'd take some of the shiny off of the rocks and make sure you can't see that 2 are the same rock, same rotation next to each other - nice render though

Title: Re: Ronen beckerman MS house
Post by: bouhmidage on 2014-04-07, 20:40:39

ok friends !! i'll check it :D